jb, i like the overall tone of this poem. I find that it's bittersweet. I like the concept of using rain to cover tears...very creative.
Well, take care! U muz be busy these days!
- Fiona
p/s: i wrote a new poem too :)

I really Love this one. 'Cry in Rain'. This is what i called the' X- Factor' poem. It feels so much better reading it. Although it sounds sad but i kindda take it as a lesson to learn despite my ugly past in my previous relationship. A great poem of portraying someone's life and experinces.

gr8 piece!!~ like da last 2 verses the most~~ well written,bing~ keep up da good work!! p/s: is this poem based on real life experience?? :P hehe

So sad and sweet... good job!

I like the way you started some verses with I and then a verb... very effective. I also like the last three verses as it is very true, few people let others see their true feelings... people are scared i guess...
Very nicely written. Keep going!
-xx-

i like the way u portray rain, i have like 4 poems bout rain, check them out if u want to c my perspective. ~*Keep writing*~