FINALLY AN UPDATE

Ooh baby baby! Rudolf better make an honest woman out of Marlene and marry her soon, har har. Great work, can't wait for more!

That scared me at first... I thought Rudolf would've been in his office cheating on Marlene with some floozie. I'm glad I was wrong!

Haha, I love how you chose the name Karolyn for the evil, golddigging character. The irony is almost too much! Bahahaha!

I have a feeling that brat is going to show up again for her revenge. Again, I hope I'm wrong!

Update soon!

Finally decided to make an honest woman out of her! Hahaha.

AW x 43920857493078493025784390278543

That was really sweet. It almost made me forget about mentioning the, "hugging from behind," thing, which disturbs me for some reason.

But, back to brass tacks:

AW!

Can't wait for the honeymoon!!

Aww, that was fluffy. I like the house descriptions... so 20's! Marlene is becoming quite the little homemaker, no? Hehehe, it's almost illegal! Oh, well, Rudolf's parents don't have to know that.

Your chapter is so good. About Marlene's age, are they going to marry soon? It seems that way. Thank you and please update.

Finally in Munich! Great descriptions! Seems like Rudolf and Marlene are gonna have some peaceful time together, aw, so sweet! Great job, as always! Can't wait for the next!

this is amazing

Aww, that's great that they're off the boat... at last, some peace for Marlene, haha... do my plot senses say there's only gonna be one hotel room?? I hope so, because you and I both know that mush is now a spectator sport! Yay! Another fantastic chapter! Update soon, or else!!

An update! Anton is creepy... he REEKS suspiciousness. Hopefully he'll get washed overboard and get eaten by a convenient pack of lurking sharks! I didn't mean that, I don't want your plot to get all eratic, haha. Even though I do feel bad for Marlene, I feel even worse for Rudolf! I mean, he has to take care of his woman (hehe) instead of spending some nice, romantic time with her, you know? And I'm sure he was looking forward to it! He IS a man, after all! Well, I'm sure he doesn't mind, right? Oh course not, Rudolf's too nice! Yay! Very nice detail in this chapter, and perhaps Anton is foreshadowing something to come? Can't wait to see!

That is SO not a weak ending. I found it to be beautiful in its simplicity or "Simply beautiful." >hehe< Okay, I'm staying too long now, I've to check out your other story.
laters,
pink

Aw! That wasn't a weak ending! ^_^ Oh man...I can relate to the sea sick thing...I got on a boat ONCE. After an hour I was like Ughf...get me off this thing!
3 more days? Poor Marlene.
I can't wait to see what adventures await them when they reach their destination!!
PS: Thanks for your reviews, comrade. Without them, I would wither like a rose and start smelling funky. XD
~HJ

Silence, you! The ending was great... not weak at all! Poor Marlene, she's all like, ::swoon::, and Rudolf's all like, "My darling! Let me come to your aid! ::dashing smile::", and the fangirls are like, ::swoons like Marlene::, and frankly, I LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh, how sweet! Will they get married? I wonder if they WILL be stuck in a one bedroom appartment. Rudi's so sweet that he'll give her the bed for the couch. Great job!
pink

Awesome meine comrade! I love it! Keep writing! This is going to be goodZ! *pops popcorn in mouth* *smiles with mouth full of popcorn and does thumbs up sign*
--Comrade Stavon--

Ah, off to Germany, aka super fun magic land! Er... I kid. Anyway, great job so far, keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^