Loving the story!
Well, I sadly don't have any un-cliched suggestions but I reckon what you've got here is great. I hope you get rid of your writer's block and update sometime soon.

-Innocence

naww poo. hope you're hearts feeling all better now, although i got no idea when you posted this 'authors note'
anyhuu, pretty please update soon! for some reason i like carter better. hez such a coolio person =D dznt make sense ayy. loll. i like Raythe, but just not as much as carter. i was major sadd when carter got cutt. :(
hoep your seniour year is goin coolio..btw, what do you mean exactly wid portfolios..??
once again, update soon!

omg LOL i

Hiya!
found your story
up to chapter 9
AND
I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT
and
i just wanted to say that when you wrote Casey
i thought you meant she said Casey
then her brother asked her which one because Lacy sorta misspelt with Carter (like mixed together) is wait for it CASEY!!
yeah just thought i would tell you!
Bye
AWESOME STORY!!

hi. i just read your story and it's beautiful.
It's a pity that you haven't been updating for a long time.
Please, can you consider continuing this story?

I wished I could read the end of this story

Im glad you fell in love and sorry it didnt work out ... right a chappie soon though :)

I LOVED THIS STORY! WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED STILL?

What a great story. I think you should leave this one like this and write a sequel a few years later after California. Hope all is well!

wow. awesome story! i love Carter! he is so cool! like his character. hate tammy. she's so up herself! and Raythe? what is wrong with him? he hurt Hannah. too much, i must say.

anyway, i still love it:)) youre great!! keep up.

hope u update soon though.

:)

No updates for nearly four years! wow!
Please don't tell us you've given up on the story... I wanna know what happens when she goes to California and if/how she/things change when she gets back.
UPDATE PLEASE!! :)

she's moving to California..omg...maybe when she gets back raythe would see how much he misses her..update soon..

O.M.G. This story is amazing! I am in love with Raythe! You have no idea how upset I got when I realized there were no more chapters! I don't know if you still plan on finishing this story, considering how long it's been since your last update but i realyy hope you do! You're amazing, keep writing!

more please?

I loved your story! It's amazing! I think you ended it the best you could have!