This is a fantastic story. The changing of POVs is very well done.

I like it so far. Good story. I'll read the rest either now or later probably.

Okay i absolutly LOVE this story!! please update like asap! please? its been awhile since u have!

Hm... I wonder where you got the 'really bad @ grounding their kids' thing. ;) Poor Todd. I enjoyed reading Amanda's text messages and I liked this chapter, but I really feel for Todd and Amber. That's gotta be hard. Well done, ttyl. ~*Mettie*~

Hey. My best friend is sick today, so I'm eating lunch alone in the yearbook room with no one to talk to and no one to hang out with in the dark, so I thought I'd read some awesome writing. Pretty good diversion from my pathetic social life, actually, so thanks. It was a good chapter. I love Alexz's innocence. It's so refreshing. Haha, the sneaking out during the sermon thing was funny. I used to do that as a kid until my parents caught on that I conveniently had to use the restroom like every week exactly in the middle of the sermon. 'Cept I didn't have a call to receive. I wanted to go down and play with the toys in the nursery, lol. Well, this review has been incredibly long and rather unhelpful, but that's what you get for getting yourself sick. ~*Mettie*~

Wow - Another great chapter, my friend! I really liked this one. Having Amanda's opinion is so entertaining! I know she's mean, but it's so fun to read about her spoiled little life. It makes me glad that my dad's not a millionaire - what if I turned out like her? No, but I really liked it. I like how Katie was the second one to find out - imagine! That's the last person I would expect. She's usually so absorbed with herself! Still, I know she's got a good heart... I can't wait 'til you update again! I know you're busy, but please try! Love ya! ~*Mettie*~

Wow. Drama, drama, drama! I LOVE it! DEFINITELY your best chapter, yet. I really, really, REALLY enjoyed this one, girl. I like the way you tied it all in and I can't WAIT to find out what happens! PLEASE update the SECOND you get back in town! Anticipatingly (I made that word up) yours, ~*Mettie*~

I like having more p.o.v.'s, but you're seriously lackin' in the grammar dept. (especially in the first 2 or 3 parts...) Brush up the next chapter and you'll shine! Your Biggest Fan, Mettie

Hello, Miss "I'll Huff and I'll Puff and I'll Blow Your Computer Screen Away!" Talk about the drama! My, my, and we always assumed I was the one who needed a shrink... No, this was a very good chapter. Better than your last one, actually. I really like the idea of the baby's room. EXCITEMENT! Wouldn't it be fun to decorate a baby's room? Ah... Anywho, update soon, babe! Love readin' your stuff! ~*Mettie*~

Hey, babe! It may be mean, but I'm enjoying seeing Katie suffer a little. I know she's good deep, deep down, but after the way she's treated her family, she could stand a few more lonely lunches in my opinion. Instead of the usual hard copy review, I'm going to have to submit one electronically because we're low on ink. :-( Sorry! And I hope volleyball doesn't keep you too busy to update soon! I never tire of reading your work! Lots of Love! ~*Mettie*~ XOXO

i like it.. i can't wait for more.
I know exactly how you feel.. school not giving you enough time to write. it sux. my notebooks are filled with new chapters for all my stories.. none of them finished. its really funny, people will be like ~Wats that~ and i'm like leave me a lone i have to finish this! then a teacher piles a bunch of worksheets on ur desk! ahh
ok
i'm done babling
great chapter though
~Alison

Hi, that was good... getting better, add more soon.
Luv ya
~Alison~

wow, that was EXTREMELY confuseing. hun, i love ur writing, but i was completely lost, the only parts i understood were cory's and abc's.. everyone else's was a blur... maybe you could seperate the POV's to different chapters... idk ,... just an idea.
ALison

awesome story! please update it soon!

Okay, first off, Amanda seems like a real ** to me. Second, Drew seems like a traitor and doesn't deserve his friends' time or energy. And third, is Amanda excited about spending time with Drew or Sloane because you said Sloane, but I thought she was with Drew now. Maybe I'm just confused because I haven't been getting a lot of sleep. Update Soon!
Feebs