 ZiggyGurl 2005-06-12 . chapter 14Aw *tears up* *waves hands over eyes to make sure imaginary mascara doesn't run*
You rock. |
 StarrzAngel 2005-01-07 . chapter 13How sad, how sad!! Your chapters are always so SAD! But, that's a good thing. You can really get a sense of the characters' emotions. Sorry for not reviewing earlier! Wonderful chapter, yet again! I look forward to more soon! |
 claire 2004-12-17 . chapter 9 no offence yea but this story realy doesnt make sense. she has a broken neck yet she can punch him? and it all happens a bit too fast, and i reckon you should add more detail so the reader gets to know the characters more. |
 claire 2004-12-17 . chapter 7 err... why didnt raven go to her house and try and stop her? why is she falling asleep or whatever. i dont think this chapter really makes sense. |
 StarrzAngel 2004-11-21 . chapter 12Oh my gosh, I am so sorry for not reviewing earlier! I've been having computer problems for awhile now... But I've gotten the chance to catch up on the story! And... it's excellent! I just love the way you write! There's so much description, and you really get a sense of the characters' emotions as they speak! Great job! |
 ZiggyGurl 2004-11-19 . chapter 12Hello Dear. Its been a while since you last wrote hasn't it? Is this the last chapter? *ponders* Anyway...I need to write now. This was a lovely chapter and Katlyn is weird. |
 ZiggyGurl 2004-09-05 . chapter 9 I'm too lazy to sign in, but this was a great chapter. I would type more but...it was so beautiful I am now in tears. *grin* |
 StarrzAngel 2004-09-03 . chapter 9HOW SAD!! But, the chapter was great, yet again! You have such a talent! I loved the suspense towards the beginning of the chapter, where Katlyn was fighting against Paul. Great chapter (as usual). Let's keep the awesome updates coming! |
 Princess Jilla 2004-08-21 . chapter 8AH you better update missy! I mean it! Lol, I really like this story. Very suspensful. |
 ATTITUDE01 2004-08-21 . chapter 8aw man now i'm curious of what happens what hit her head? update soon!! |
 StarrzAngel 2004-08-21 . chapter 8So dramatic and sad!! I feel bad for Katlyn... But, you wrote this chapter so incredibly well! Kudos for yet another great chapter! |
 StarrzAngel 2004-08-06 . chapter 7DON'T DO IT, KATLYN!! Aww, that chapter really was dramatic! Poor Katlyn, I feel sorry for her! *cries* Other than being so sad (which isn't a bad thing), it was a very long and nicely-written chapter! Good job! I really look forward to reading more soon! |
 ZiggyGurl 2004-08-06 . chapter 7Sorry it took me so long to review. I don't want Katlyn to die! That means the story is over! THIS IS ONLY CHAPTER SEVEN |
 ZiggyGurl 2004-08-02 . chapter 6Thats right, you want to stop someone from murdering you, the best answer to that problem is kill yourself. *sob* I wub Katlyn...*sniffle* Ashlyn, I'll hurt you if you do! |
 ZiggyGurl 2004-07-27 . chapter 5*sobs onto Nikki's shoulder* But I liked Emily! You are evil! lol j/k. I knew it was gonna happen anyway...cuz you told me...but anyway...*looks around* Now I am paranoid for Katlyn! |