wow!That was really good!Love the rhyme!

I like this it is really good.

Blessed be! This was so well-written and descriptive! Bravo.

Wow, another great one from you! Nature is the an undying source of religious inspiration - as well as poetic inspiration. Fav stanza is "Did the sun.../...the dazzling moon?"

i really enjoyed your poem, there was some very beautiful imagry used, lovely descriptions. i liked the stanza about season and moon change. all together, very nucely written, a very good job. well done :)