Reviews for Tantalyzing
simpleplan13 1/11/05 . chapter 1
ah i can relate.. nice job
Manuel Fajar 1/6/05 . chapter 1
Hemoglobin red,

Needs more oxygen for bed,—

Energy's all bled. —m—
pointythings 9/2/04 . chapter 1
Woah, creepy.
erin 7/17/04 . chapter 1
so you need more blood? blood is not a color, it is an object.
L. S. Lynn 7/15/04 . chapter 1
this poem to me describes basic human instinct. We are drawn to carnage. It is what brings us to action. It excites us, no matter how much we try to deny it
FireNeiko 7/15/04 . chapter 1
Blod
X9
coolness