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| KelseyBell910 2007-08-17 ch 7,  | abusethis is really good! too bad that you couldn't finish it! =[ |
| glamoureste 2007-06-09 ch 7, | abuseOH NO! YOU CAN'T ABANDON THIS STORY! :[ That's depressing. Cause I really really really really love it. |
| Summer McAdams 2007-05-17 ch 7, | abuseWell..wow. Last time you updated, it was 2005. AND look at the calendar, its 2007 already! :D haha. Kidding. Didn't mean to get to your nerves or something. I just wanted to say that I absolutely enjoyed your story! And even though its been two years already, I'm still hoping you'll update! :D Just a suggestion, though. You have no problem with dialogue whatsoever but I think you have to give a little background for each character. I just think the story's way too fast. But I also think that Zachary is hot. So is Christian. :D Man, I wish you'd update, but, oh well. :D I'm still happy you wrote this. |
| Holly Harper 2007-04-13 ch 7, anon. | abusei just want you to know that...i... hate you now! your story was really good until you decided to discontinue it!please know that i would immediately forgive you if you updated. you probably don't even care that i hate you but, oh well you are just oone more person i will track down and kill. see you soon. |
| Balancing Act 2006-09-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseA promising beginning... I like the specifics of the fashion industry, it looks like you've done some research (even just by soaking info in). Just a note; try to be careful of your commas, because I think you're dropping a few and it makes it sound a little amateurish. Not that it's a bad thing, since we're all amateurs, but fixing it would just add a subtle bit of sophistication to your writing. |
| Ri 2006-09-06 ch 7, anon. | abuseUPdate! Update! Update! Ooi! Ooi! Ooi!! lmao. *grovels* |
| kalicokitty15 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseif you were going to miss this, why stop? |
| iliilili 2006-06-22 ch 7, anon. | abusecontinue... |
| hersheygirl389 2006-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abusekewl! why don't you post it as a poem? or maybe u have and i didn't notice, anyways i love it. & thx for responding |
| swimchickslam 2006-05-07 ch 7, | abuseaww that sucks D: |
| FadedWhispers 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is such a greaat idea for a story!! and you rite really well too!! |
| hersheygirl389 2006-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abusewhoops...sorry i reviwed as tricksters_queen15 but this is my fp name, so plz tell me where the poem on your profile is from? thx |
| tricksters_queen15 2006-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abusesorry that this isn't about the story (though i love it to death) but i'm really interested in the poem or song or whatever it is thats on your profile, could you plz tell me who wrote it? i'd be really greateful if you'd just review one of my poems and leave the title and author there. thx! ^_~ |
| The Girl 2006-04-09 ch 7, anon. | abuseHOW DARE YOU! |
| sheepep 2006-03-16 ch 7, | abuseretard . ur stori is good, since u r such a TARD ur an idiot. ur stori is good -- thats all .. rock in peace, cutie-ara . . |