I just sat tight and enjoyed the the linguistics of this piece. I can't really see symbolism but the phrases you use kick **. Very surreal and very hallucinagenic.
Thanks for all your reviews btw.

good... but where did the guillotine come from... its a good touch, just got lost a tiny bit...

Makes me think of a happy snug padded room. A worthy effort My Queen.
CMF

I really like this poem =) It has such a clear rhythem. b(^.^)d thumbs up
-Amber
ps: I hate getting writer's block. Good luck getting rid of it!