interesting. i think...i would like you to explain what you were thinking of when you wrote this. : ) i am very curious...because there are so many different directions you could've come upon this feel. the line breaks are getting smoother feel and they're making more of a structure instead of just being there. : ) i have a poem called "with you." :D yes, poetry is good. KEEP DOING POETRY! (haha, maybe i'll have more influence than annie. >:) she is the novelist...i am the romantically hopeless poet. :D)

its fantastical.