I absalutely LOVE this poem, there isnt a rhyme or word I dont love or dosnt enhance it. I hate the world I live in, and I've been waiting to die since the day I've been born.
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Wow, I think that is one of the most truthful poems I have ever read. I believe absolutely everything you stated in that poem, and I'm really glad you wrote it. Not only was it well-written, it was deep and meaningful. You did a great job on this poem. Keep up the good work!