that wuz really good! OMG
i don't no if i've reviewed this b4 or not, but...
it was great!
i like the consistency of inhale-exhale and yah

yah so good job
DUDE! post more of ur writings i swear, plus everysingle one of ur poems has reviews so...yep that's a good sign...
^^
l8r~ bai!
--keisi

Oh my, what subtle hinting there, yet all down with great class. Great touch with innocence.
-Cindy Moon *)

gosh this is really good.
"i see the world through/ a molassesed/ blink"
"listening/ with poverty’s/ ear"
Sheer brilliance and beauty.

*dies* HOLY CRAP THAT WAS GOD! XD You know I love you...but now...I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE!
Hehe, great poem. XD I love the broken pieces of it. It's so...incoherently coherent. ^^
Omg, SEX! Rofl!
...Haha, sorry, my mind's been thinking about sex a lot lately. *sweatdrop* Reading it again, I realize it prolly has nothing to DO with sex. ^^;;
ANYWAY, very very very flowy and **-inducing. *nodnod* XD
~ Kit ~