Hey!I tink th story is cool.You definately have imagination.Write more chapters,kay?I have a story too here,and i'm waiting for reviews.If u want to read it is called the return of the angel.keep writing,and make it more mysterious cause the title sounds so ,and so the story must be so.Good luck.

This was extremely deep for a short prose. I love the comparison of you and the scarlet flowers. How others have now conquered and what was known is now gone. The description was wonderful, I could see everything happening just as you described it.
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-Amber

This was good.. but a bit confusing.