Wow. I really, really like this! I love the chorus but I think my favorite parts are in the end of the verses where you say, "But haven't I been doing that all along? Where the hell was I when this all went wrong?" I just picture the person singing having a kind of bewildered/angry tone. Great job and keep writing!

aww and that's awsome _ um um
its awsome _ sorry but that's all i got its a lil sad but im also in a sad mood so yea
later

I love your rythm/beat.. Its amazing..another reason why i love your stuff.. so similar to blink, yet with your own oiginality! great work!

Yeah great song, thanks for the reveiw.

ah again a great pieces by you! do u ever write anything bad? i guess not, lol! i love ur stuff! and i hate to ask, but can u pls review my newest 3 pieces if possible. im still trying to get feedback on them. thanks!

Ooh, I like that one a lot. I have the same problem by the way, you know, getting screwed unaware of how I was ever at fault. Haha, very well written as usual ;D

This reminded me of a;; the stuff my friend writes. He's really good, but is too chicken to post anything. Anyhoo, I liked it! I decided to read it cuz I have a poem called Oblivious, and I wanted to see if they were anything alike, which, they aren't:)
PinkyCD

Not bad. Nice work!

Wow. I like it very much, but I think, that along with reading all of your songs, I've notived that you don't have the bridges marked. Is that just your thing, or do you not think about it? Just curious. Congrats again!
Magz.

Great angry, uncertain emotions here! The sense of not knowing what happended. Great job!
-Hawke

Haha, I think we've all been here at times. Actually "Oblivious" is one of my nick names. Interesting premise for a song. I'd have to hear the music, however lyrically it seems catchy.

I totally understand the feeling here. This is an awesome song. Great work!
-P.G.

This seems like a really cool song

In a really weird kinda way this song reminds me of Tanya Tucker's song "Some Kinda Of Trouble" Anyways, I really liked it!