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| Areneth 2005-01-30 ch 1,  | abuseGood writing. I liked the diction. It was very dark, and I like how I could connect well with the guy and sort of get an understanding as to what he is going through. |
| neferteenie 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was really well written. And it's just...Wow. You have a way with words. |
| gemini7 2005-01-07 ch 1, anon. | abusea great piece of writing. very sad. |
| Grape 2004-12-18 ch 1, | abusewow this is really awsome! |
| bluekiwi990 2004-12-15 ch 1, | abusewow this was...beautiful...i loved it. you are most definatly an extremely talented writer.~nellie |
| Nephriteon 2004-10-08 ch 1, | abuseIt was deep, impressionable and thought-provoking. Is the girl suicidal? Weird guy...but somewhat understandable. |
| the melody of your demise 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abuseooh this wuz realli well-written...*adds to fav stories!* |
| aiur 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abusewow that was GOOD. better than good. that was beautiful. a little eerie, the way you wrote it, but that's due in part to how "broken" can be such a haunted word - for me. excellent story. i hope you leave it where it is. you've touched something that i think might be ruined by going on. and the repetition throughout it was perfect to tie it all together seamlessly. i loved it, if you can't tell. =) ~k8 |
| Rainy 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseIncredible. Very pretty. I think reading this actually increased my intelligence. |
| fadedtune 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is extremely well-written, and I cannot see a single flaw to your words. Your writing style works perfectly with this piece. In short, I adore it. |
| Infinite Smiles 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseO my god! That was awesome! It was eerie and such... realistic descriptions. YOu really brought out the complexities of love and life and personalities. God, this was awesome!! I am putting it in my faves. |