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| Tangerine Tickle 2005-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseOoh, nevermind the publish date, this poem was AWESOME!! I loved the rhyming, especially at the end. . . Excellent work. ~Tangerine Tickle~ |
| Amour Amorita Saphira 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseWow... This is really nice^^ love it.. rhymes well and understandable. Clearly^^ I like it^^ |
| Eris Mackenzie 2005-06-28 ch 1, | abuse*stares* Makes me... SAD! *bawls* No, but this really reminds me of Hansel and Gretel...you know... only like...dead... heh.. ^__^ And another thing, I LOVE getting reviews from you! ^_^ I must say you are definately one of my favourate reviewers! You're adorable! ^_- |
| Sreym 2004-08-01 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good, I like it a lot. The rhyming was great, the repetition of certain sounds made it a good read. Very nice. And the subject was. . . chilling in a way. |
| NybCR 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. Fast-paced, perfectly rhymed, and filled with blunt, raw emotion. Personally, I don't think you have to worry about the whole story-in-the-poem thing because, really, all poems have a hidden story, just like all stories are constructed with poetic ideas and phrases. Anyway, great job. Keep writing. ^_^ |
| she's not breathing 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abusethat's a pretty darn good way to start off your poetry writing on this site, i'd say. i love that. i admit i was a little sceptical reading your summary because of how poems that "tell a story" are usually written. but you pulled it off really well! the rhyming and everything. it flowed quite nicely, too. so really good job. check out something i've written? ~k8 |