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| Seeker of the Way 2004-08-05 ch 1,  | abusewoo-hoo! GO, go go! (BTW, a few typos, to should be too for example). I love this anthem! w00tacular! (yes, I made that up!) |
| Midnight Proc 2004-08-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem... A couple of things I have suggestions for: I think the poem would have flowed better if you didn't repeat, "I'm going to". It just seemed redundant and out of place. Also, I noted a few spelling errors (should be "too" instead of "to"). Otherwise, this was a well-written poem. I loved the message within it. Fantastic job! |
| Phoebe Buffet 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abuseSarah this is fantastic! You have a great way of working words. Peace: BRAD PS: Thanks for the good review. I agree; it probably is one of my better works. |
| Jace1 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abusethis is good, it says alot and i love it when poems say so much without rhyming. some people think it always has to rhyme to make sense, but thats not true. i know my poems usually rhyme but thats just me and how i write, good job on this.. wonderful. |
| L.M.Crow 2004-07-20 ch 1, | abuseo i like this :) tis awesome |
| phthalo blue 2004-07-19 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem, especially the part about going to drive too slow and then changing your mind to drive too fast because one day someone will be yelling at me for driving slow and the next for driving fast. |
| ByFireAndMoonlight 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is good, a pick me up from the rest, good job. |
| Lauren Raven 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseVery very very good. I can definitely relate to this. Great job...going on my favorites list once I boot some people off... |