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Reviews For: Chocolate's Wish
Toothache 2005-05-30 . chapter 1
*cries* It's so sad!! I bet it speaks the words of millions of heartbroken girls out there, and that's why I Like it! =D Maganda! (Is that how you spell it?) This poem's going on my favourite stories list! =D
psychedelic aya 2004-07-18 . chapter 1
I personally liked this a lot! It touched me--especially the end. ^^ You're the kind of person who's gifted with poems! As for me--I can't make poems. LoL. Especially the ones in Tagalog... *sweatdrop*
I'd like to say thank you so much for reviewing "Twisted Fantasy"! You don't know how much it means to moi! ^^ I like the moon a lot too, heheh, thus the character Luna. LoL. And I'll be waiting for your story, by the way! ^^ I'm trying to continue TF now... heheh. I actually have a whole draft of it... and wah... ang haba! LoLz...
Anyway, once more, I shall say that this poem is nice! Off to read the others^^
Sadira 2004-07-16 . chapter 1
Hey, I really like this. It's so sad and I can feel the longing that you're expressing for this guy. There's some beautiful ideas and imagery, I especially like the references to the photo. Don't stop writing poetry, you have a great voice!
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