if this has a melody...*hinthint* this is a very good lyrical piece. it moves. it feels. it breathes. and it makes it really REAL. i like it.

actually, dis is pretty qood. i was just annoyed at u yesterday. ^^'

this could be a really good song, i know it was meant to be one, but a lot that i read don't seem to flow like urs. ~*Keep writing*~