wow, that was awesome, yet confusing. The he, they, we, them, are all part of the world. The /there/ is where all of the he, they, we, them stay. And we are all part of the light, as well as the darkness...

That's what I got from this poem. Or what I inferred. So now I must move on to read your other congratulating pieces of work.

talking to yourself again...GOOD! it's good for you i love it, and i get it too^^ but it is me and i'm messed up ok you could be talking to your cat...your bird (which is mean to me!) or your dog...you know that bird has it out for me! it does! so i love it *pokes poem* hehe...^^

Hiya 'tis Dana...Um...Yeah... IT was confuseing who is HE and THEY and THEM?
Any way it was awesome. It rocked even if it was confusing...

hmm... something to think about. ~*Keep writing*~

Are you a rabid wolf?
That was the longest, and the most inane poem I have ever read. Somehow, that's the beauty of it!
But I think the length doesn't suit it. Too long, so it sort of drags the mind-boggling questions.
Still something interesting though.