Terrific poem.

I love the 'dances in the moonlight' part.

~Twilight Starr~

Argh.. So I had just got done posting an awesome review. Basically, let me just hit the surface of what I just hit in depth a second ago. Ok, so isnt the tone of this piece a little somber to be a fitting poem for the only story of which had a happy ending in all of the stories you've created? Dont get me wrong, the poem is raw, but still, "Kiss Me Goodbye" ends well, so should this poem, right? Maybe Im missing something. But hey, sometimes you gotta lean on a friend and let them know when your in need. *winks and nudges* Ehem. Nice poem, Angelina.

The poem speaks for itself, but no comment would be a lie.

Julia.

i love 'and i know you'd feel lost without these painful reminders'
u have an utterly amazing talent!!
*bows down in admiration*
i hope some day ill be as gud at expressin emotion as u!
much love xx
please review my story: thats not how it happened.
i wud love ur opinion!

you write so well... i love kiss me goodbye. *i cried!!* please update it now... :p

That was just beautiful! :)
~~*Nid*~~

Very good, if possibly a little overdone--it tends to get a little cliched and melodramatic towards the end, but not a huge problem. Great job; I like the emotions you convey. Keep writing.