and blind desire it is.
this is so beautiful,
in a horrific way.
you're going in my favourites.

Darling, your work is fantastic, don't feel down on yourself. Writing has a life of its own so some times it can be cruel or kind to us. It can be hard. But all of your work is beautiful. I wouldn't worry.
Much love,
Juliet.

Sheesh, you people UNDERAPPRECIATE FREAKING GOOD POETRY. Blindies. I really like this poem, and I feel honored that I was your helpful viewer(although i'm sure not the only one). I really just like the feel of it and the description, it's very emotional and it's a poem that you can look through and find something. Kapish? I love it i love it I love it. I love you.

Unusually good angst! That sounds so patronising . . . sorry, but for every poem like this that turns out well I seem to read three that really haven't. Well done!

Really good. I love the last line.

Good...I can relate to most of it. Since I'm horrible at coming up with summaries too, what I usually do is just put the first four or five lines of the poem in quotations. Great job; keep writing.