interesting ending. how strange it is to see how much people change through several years. great piece, i really like it.

Hm. Sounds like there's some strange people out there... Nice poem. I like the flow of it. It is well written. Good job!

The human mind is indeed a wonder. Isn't it wierd how we remember such silly things for no apparent reason? Your second verse is a bit odd--what do you mean when you say "which is quite lacking/When I think of my friends of that time"? I dont know, maybe I'm just having a brain fart or I'm stupid but that line seemed a tad off. Anyhoo, I love how you describe this girl--it reminds me of my friend, Kay, who also has spiky hair and wears very unique earings. Cool!
-Aillil

very interesting and certainly unique. I like this poem.

Interesting poem. It's different and unique. I enjoyed it.

Aw, I like her description. I like people like that, too, who will just come up and make friendly conversation.