I like the feeling this gives... I know very little about critiquing poetry, so I have nothing to say, but I do like it...

May I ask what the title means?

Good poem, I really liked the way from tired down, they sort of linked to each other, like a thought was continued. quite a strong feeling to me...
Branwen

Interesting. I had to read this several times to see if I could understand it's meaning. What I sort of realized, is it's not really a meaning. It comes across to me as a feeling.
So after reading it again, I got the impression of freedom. Leaving behind something that was hurting for a long time. That's just me. -Mr McPierce

Not much to say about this poem--wow, I really dont have much to say/critisize at all today, do I?--there's only one thing I have to say. The word "Love" in the second line seemed really out of place. What do you mean by putting that in there? Am I missing something? I liked the image of "'Burnt ice"--really cool. Keep writing!
-Aillil