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| arcana 2004-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuselast stanza there. isolation of the word cry. good effect. |
| Areida Hollyoak 2004-07-19 ch 1,  | abuseheyy... loved this one... after you sent it i printed it out and stuck it on the wall... youve changed it abit tho... still wonderfully beautiful. free of your ashes in the soil. and 'i don't want you to go's. |
| pointythings 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abuseAw...that's so sad. Did that really happen to you? I like how you focus on the soil. However, you might want to rethink some of the punctuation; parentheses, exclamation points, etc. I think some of it interferes with the poem. But overall, I really like it. |
| Elizabeth Szorcsik 2004-07-16 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. Pretty sad. Keep those poems coming! |