Nice, I like it alot. The line "How could you do this" seems to kinda jarr the flow a little bit. Maybe if you changed the wording of it, it would harmonize the poem better.

Intriguing. I wonder... do you plan on writing a story for this poem, as a companion piece or something? It would certainly be interesting to see the raw emotions in this poem formed into a story... Regardless, I enjoyed reading your poem. Very haunting. _