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| NybCR 2004-08-19 ch 4,   | Well. That was certainly interesting. |
| NybCR 2004-07-17 ch 3, | (squeals) YEAH FOR CHI!! That was so cool, how she went back for Harumi-San, and then JUST BARELY made it through the fence. Personally, I thought it was rushing and a little too short, but that's okay, seeing as how it was Action and, therefore, MEANT to be rushing. Anyway, good story. ^__^ |
| NybCR 2004-07-16 ch 2, | A little confusing, but fascinating, never the less. It's a little disappointing that this is only a short story since it would make a good story going more in depth to Michelle's "imaginary" world. But whether or not to elaborate on this short story is your decision, of course. Anyway, good job. Keep writing. ^_^ |