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| Amelia Carr 2005-01-07 ch 1,  | abusei especially like the 'reminding me, taunting me, binding me'. another good poem! |
| SleepDontWeep 2004-09-27 ch 1, | abuseo u get better, which i didnt think was possible to do but u did it!! u have this cool air around ur poems puttin them in w orld of their own! lots of kisses and hugs for ur lovely review on 'true lies'. please if u wudnt mind reviewin my story 'thoughts of eva' it wud mean alot to me! mwah!! love ya lots! |
| suey and liuey 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abusegreat job nana! u seem to have a knack for poetry... maybe u'll become a poet when u grow up...muahahah! lol. btw i bet the blog tht inspired u was jermies. |
| she's not breathing 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseyou've done well capturing the feeling of when life seems to be nothing but a cycle. and we can all say we've been there and felt that, ne? i wonder if i'll ever shake this stupid practice of reviewing poetry with this account, but meh. nice work, especially since poetry on this topic tends to sound really childish and have like no depth. you've pulled it through. i like the ending part, about Day and Night and Time ... that was cool. nice job maybe not so personal as i like reading in poems, but good nonetheless. ~k8 |