i like it, keep goin

wow nice start! I like the way it's written. I honestly don't lnow what specifically but I do like it...^_^'...anyway...can't wait for the rest.
p.s. I like the cigarette thing...that's how I got started...remembering a boy...A lot of the poems I havent put up on the site talk abot things like that.
Keep up the good work!