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Reviews For: The Pull of the Sea

hidden jewel
2004-08-10
ch 1,
abuseThank-You first of all for reviewing my poetry.
Your poem really touched my heart, brought tears to my eyes. You know, I've been out of touch with God for a while now, but reading your poetry makes me want to give my talent to him. And I wish I could use my gift like you.
Thank-You --Serenity
AntiPleasure
2004-07-18
ch 1,
abuseWow, beautiful descriptions. I like that repitition of "fill" in the last part. Nicely done.
Jenna xx
Getuie
2004-07-18
ch 1,
abuseThe form of this poem aided the message so well. And such a compelling message it is. I like the comparison you draw between you and the see and the second stanza has to be my favourite.
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