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| hidden jewel 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseThank-You first of all for reviewing my poetry. Your poem really touched my heart, brought tears to my eyes. You know, I've been out of touch with God for a while now, but reading your poetry makes me want to give my talent to him. And I wish I could use my gift like you. Thank-You --Serenity |
| AntiPleasure 2004-07-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, beautiful descriptions. I like that repitition of "fill" in the last part. Nicely done. Jenna xx |
| Getuie 2004-07-18 ch 1, | abuseThe form of this poem aided the message so well. And such a compelling message it is. I like the comparison you draw between you and the see and the second stanza has to be my favourite. |