well. interesting.

:) CD

a-ha!

:) CD

So Cecial and Davrik are children...well, they behave very much like children...
I liked this ending...it was nice and warm and fuzzy feeling...
Anyways, looking forwad to your next story
DarkSorceress

Interesting... very interesting... Anyway now that you have given me a lot to think about with this chapter I have to run, awesome job, update soon _ Ciao,
Saharian

My stupid computer won't let me sign in... anyway awesome chapter, as always. How fast do you type by the way? Either you type way to fast or you have too much time on your hands because you update so often. Not that that is a bad thing ;-)
Saharian

Erlimbre is good...bringing down a kingdom like that and all. Are the King and Quen's conditions due to their inbreeding?
ANyways, great chapter
DarkSorceress

That was...fast...the whole fight i mean...I thought you would have spent ages or something bulding up the suspence to the final battle...and it is good that you didnt I suppose.
Anyways, I greatly anticipate your next update...I really wanna know who is going to win!
DarkSorceress

Do you know how insanely awesome you are? How do you do it? I mean jeezuz I manage to update my stories barely once a week and I get an Author Alert about you almost everyday. It's insane. Anyway I decided to read this story too since you seemed to be updating it so often and I love it too. Awesome writing. One thing though, try to go for a bit more variety with pronouns and nouns, like don't use the names every single time go for she and he a bit more or w/e. Maybe I'm just weird... _
Saharian

For some reason, I got the feeling that Qerlirk was insane even when he was speaking to Poltchi...poor guy...
Great last three chapters
DarkSorceress

Awesome. While i am not a fan of fantasy, i felt myself drawn in by the story. HOwever, certain parts lacked a little believability, such as herchers rise from an able seaman to first mate. That doesn't happen. Take some time to work out the kinks like that, and then let me know, because i enjoyed this story very much.

hmm, Qerklirk working for Poltchi...I think that will work...he probably needs peace of some kind...poor guy, going mad and all...
Great Chapter
DarkSorceress

Good story. Can't think of anything else to say.

Poor Therisk...stuck with Hemirse...
About the King and Queen brother-sister thing...you do realize that years of inbreeding would have disasterous effects of the royal blood line...alot of the offspring would end up with genetic disorders or just die.
Interesting chapter.
Update Soon
DarkSorceress

Cecial's temple is really interesting, and I like the descriptions you gave of it. Just wondering, did Cecial talk to the priests and tell them to forgive Maeriel for being an outsider or something?
DarkSorceress

Qerklirk meets his Polchti-following friend... hmm... I rather agree with Qerlirk's not trusting any of the three, since so far they all seem a bit self-centered...
Great job on this chapter!