Reviews for Goodbye to You
i collect lullabies 8/11/09 . chapter 1
This poem is amazing. I'm running out of good words to describe the powerfulness (I don't think that's a word, but I'll go with it for now) of your writing.
LeilaniBlue 1/21/09 . chapter 1
wow... i have no words to describe how amazing this is... how old are you?
lael1bologna 11/29/08 . chapter 1
I think emotion was in this song. I liked it! ;) Kep rockin'!
sunshineofyourlife 6/17/06 . chapter 1
ah! oh you make me cry. i love it! i love it all.

-Sunshine ((continues crying))
simpleplan13 8/13/04 . chapter 1
aw sadness.. nicely done though
Captain Swatsenbeige 8/9/04 . chapter 1
Aw thats so sad...I had an incident like that too once, but the guy was jsut a friend...but aw i feel your pain, you poor thing...but other than that the poem was really heartfelt and sweet...at least you can let go...some can't so that makes the poem ten times more meaningful...i love it...write more, you're awesome at it...and thanks for reviewing!
Captain
alwayslove 8/3/04 . chapter 1
OMG, I can totally relate to this poem. I liked this guy alot and he was moving. But you loved him, so it must have been so much harded on you. I know how you feel, but this is an inspiring poem about how you should move on!
TickleMeElmo217 7/30/04 . chapter 1
aw *hugs a million times* i'm sorry hes moving on...youll find another one!
*ticklemeelmo*
Ironiclife 7/30/04 . chapter 1
*tear* I'm in a similar situation! I'm moving away, and the one I love cannot follow. He loves me, which makes it much harder, because I cannot simply be angry with him and forget him. I feel for you and wish you the best.
Denra
Lauren Raven 7/28/04 . chapter 1
I like this poem but I think it could be better if the rhymes in the beginning weren't so contrived. But I'm super picky about rhymes, so take that with a grain of salt ) And thanks for the review of 'This Game,' I'm glad you liked it. ) Great job, keep writing.
Romantic Squirrel 7/20/04 . chapter 1
aw, thats sad. I am sorry that happened. I liked this poem, but at the start, I didnt much care for the ryming. But then again I dont like rymeing very much altogether