wow, really powerful poem

i like the way that the rhymes don't seem forced, it seems writing poetry is a natural talent for you!

keep up the great work

x weasel within x

Beautiful, just beautiful. I loved the language; it was just so pretty. You hardly ever see poems like this now a days and this was a rare treat. Thanks for sharing :D

This is a really fantastic poem, great job! It shows so much emotion and the words you use paint a picture beautifully! And thanks for my review, very much appreciated!

Pretty good! ^.^ There's one thing that could use tweaking, though. The flow is a bit awkward; try shortening your lines. Otherwise, I like it! Great job! ^_~

I enjoyed this poem, though I usually don't go for things like this. I liked it though. Well written. Good job.

beautiful and sad. . .all the things a poem like this should be. . .excellent work!
BTW, I don't know what A-levels are but it sounds like you did well, so congrats!
~Arlyn, the keeper of the sacred pencil.

Sad, but well worded.
Thumbs up, keep going.
Tigger...

excellent poem! It was very well written.

Loved that! I'm hardly a poet, so any attempts to comment on meter and structure would be pointless. But this poem touched me deeply.

Truly beautiful. The language of a few centuries past really makes this poem seem timeless in a Shakespearian sort of way.

I don't know much about poetry... but I think I know enough to say that THIS is GOOD! It moved me... (that doesn't happen much)
Bravo.

Amazing. I cannot write sonnets for the life of me, so this, in comparison to my own work, is spectacular. The theme is consistant, the sorrow of the piece bleeds through every line--and I love the idea of him "Seeking wisdom in the Norsemen's visions"--you can feel her resentment towards his journey. Very very nice.
-Aillil

A sad, but a very beautiful poem...
There are some wonderful images and the rhyme doesn't seem forced at all.
Excellent!

WOW!
That's so beautiful.
I just absolutly love your word choice.
Very good job!
~Sakura~

Very touching. I'm amazed your choice of words. So detailed to describe something so simple and painful. Very nice work.