Touching. Well written. I liked the title.

This seems so... m, raw. Like you were overcome by this sudden feeling of emptiness. I like the way the poem is so expressive.

Aww, poor simple plan. What an expressive poem. Don't worry, you're something: you're one of the few people who reviews my stuff! Yes!

Raw emotions from the inside, I can feel what you're trying to say cause it's simply put. Not bad, not bad.
Jenna xx

i really liked the feel to this one. almost a simple state of confusion that this person did not come. lost suddenly, feeling as nothing, as u said. great job!

hey, this is awesome! i like the maybe part, p.s. thx for ur review on Deep In My Soul, l8er

ah i like i like! a change from ur normal haikus but good yes yes