This was so good! Really sad, but also really good. The poem really seems to flow.

With your poems you seem to have the same flowing writting style that you have successfully made your own, well done and continue writting..
bekkii

So sad... yet it's well done, I think. Yet I'm growing tired of sad tales...

wowee. since when have u ever written poetry? gosh, and it was actually pretty good! but didn't understand what happened to Josie and who the person is reciting the poem, is it a guy? and what is the relationship between them. but it is really good!