you write amazing poems...

Beautiful, the words flow. the idea is pretty good.

O! I like it! It grows gradually like a story!! Keep up the good work!

wow well done i am impressed, with more practise you may become better than me again... (not that i am any good, but hey well written
bekkii

Suicide. I'll never understand it, nor ever accept it. A good poem, though, with great emotion.

woopee, another poem! this is another good one. i like!