Wow! Brutally amazing! I like the emotion in this piece! Is this something you're planning on continuing or what? If you wrote more to it, I don't think ANYONE would be disappointed!

Directed to 'me': Moll-doll, you're an idiot. Except that at the same time, you're a literary genius...
- Gab-Wab

this is cool.

haven't reviewed anyone in a while...but this is great. i really liked it. well done. liked the descriptions of the city at the beginning espescially. pity about the length though, although i'm presuming there isn't going to be more.