Profound. Strong.
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lol... very different from most of your poems, but still jsut as awesome... definately a perfect wedding

I like this a lot, except for a few parts that didn't excatly fit, it's really good. I wish all weddings could be like that, that's how it used to be and that's how it should be. But good job, this is a really beautiful poem.

This was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

wow this was really beautiful! wow! i love the descriptions... kind of fragmenty... but wow. this is just... great. wow. i like the throw the bouquet to another girl who never thought she could love... i hope someone can prove me wrong... anyways, this was really pretty and sophisticated... yeah. i love this.
Thanks so much for the review. it meant the world to me.
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wow, that's really pretty sounding. that's how marriage should be. that's how it USED to be. now it's all about the "laws" and "public image". that is definitely the way to go.