Um. Um. Um, this was a really great story except for the fact that it's so, bloody, at least I can tell that it will be, great job though, ALTHOUGH I HATED SHADOWS (no off.).Over all it was good enough.

*gulps* It seemed so short and sweet...until the line about carving someone up. Very good work, here.

Something really good about that and
something really creepy and also
something really annoying about it and
something really talented
For some reason I want more!