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| Blondieprincess 2004-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseThat was really amazing. i love how you put things from a mothers perspective and how you used it all in looks. nice job. Blondie |
| chainedfreedom 2004-07-20 ch 1, | abusekewl. its an interesting idea and portrayed well. I think you could make it a little longer though. ~chainedfreedom |