Wow, Crimson, that is so cool! Haikus are so much fun to write, and yours is awesome!

I thought this was an amazing and exquistate haiku. Please keep writing. It was fabulous! David Stephen

I like it!! ^_^ Haikus are 5-7-5, about nature, containing a "nature word" (yours was 'rock' and also 'clay). However! It's flexible! Some of the most famous haikus have bene a syllable off, and you can even combine them into two, or maybe even just one line! Some of my haikus do that. You can read some of them if you want. ^_^ Please review! (Mwee.)
This was very, very interesting. ^_^ I also like Ancient Egypt. It was a very interesting time, plus I watch Yu-Gi-Oh, which has Ancient Egypt tied into it. ^_^ Um