I like the way the story was weaved. It doesn't need a lot of adjectives to describe how the romance started and continued on. It was 'romantic' just like that. Nice job!

That was a really moving story! I like how it's told as a flashback, so there's more hindsight and we know that everything turned out relatively okay in the end. It's sad that Tristan couldn't go to university, but at least he's with his knight now *coughs* I mean, Will. Yay for med students! lol

Love it, I like the short version, really.. so its not all drawn out... It's great. :)

Aw! I love it! I've been in Wales for like the past month or more... I dunno, but I'm back! Woo! lol! I really lov this story so sweet and angsty at the same time! Excellent! *thumbs up*

i really enjoyed that story, I've never read a shounen-ai story before. I really liked it though, it was very well written. Good work!
One thing tho. near the end, when you were describing the similarities between the two brothers, you said "we both like members of the opposite in -that- way. members of the OPPOSITE ? Did I miss something?
just kidding.
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That was good! A few typos but still good.

This was really good. I liked the way you wrote it, the 'condensed version'. It makes it easier -somewhat- to read.