|Reviews for Sono Mizu wa Samui wa!|
| Mirai Minami 5/14/05 . chapter 1
Yoku kakete imasune. Very well written, I like it. But generally you would use 冷たい, or tsumetai, cold as in cold water or some object, rather than 寒い、samui, as in cold weather, for the title.
| suga CraZie 12/21/04 . chapter 1
nice but...er...can u translate? heh... *looks sheepish*i really need to pay more attention to my japanese class (foreign language class thing..)
the only word i know is...*drumroll*
and it means...er... it means...
gr i forgot! AGAIN!
there i go.. making a fool of myself again... -.-
(in case u didn't know already, i'm not the best at foreign languages)
by the way im workin on the prose thing.. so far i wrote exactly 12 poems but they all came out too prose-y... *sigh* maybe i'll write one thats good enough and post it
| Nikolomagne 7/24/04 . chapter 1
Demo, mizu wa samui desu yo!
Anata wa haiku wa yokatta desu. Eigo de nan desu ka?