Yoku kakete imasune. Very well written, I like it. But generally you would use 冷たい, or tsumetai, cold as in cold water or some object, rather than 寒い、samui, as in cold weather, for the title.

HI!!

nice but...er...can u translate? heh... *looks sheepish*i really need to pay more attention to my japanese class (foreign language class thing..)

the only word i know is...*drumroll*

KONNICHIWA!

and it means...er... it means...

gr i forgot! AGAIN!

there i go.. making a fool of myself again... -.-

(in case u didn't know already, i'm not the best at foreign languages)

^^;;

~sc

by the way im workin on the prose thing.. so far i wrote exactly 12 poems but they all came out too prose-y... *sigh* maybe i'll write one thats good enough and post it ^^

Totemo okashii...
Demo, mizu wa samui desu yo!
Anata wa haiku wa yokatta desu. Eigo de nan desu ka?