dude. This is hilariously funny! Keep writing!

dragonzz

if i may pick at a slight error in this story- alexander rodew a horse, not a chariot. the horse was named Beaucefalious or something like that. (i cant spell for my life!) anyways good job. very funny. I thought the whole overheating thing was amuzing.

Tetra, Tetra, Tetra...
Why do I get the feeling that you've watched Fear in Loathing in Las Vegas one too many times?
And why do I get the feeling you're going to -write- the next Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas?

*smiles* That was very interesting...I'll give you that. I like it. I love these kinds of stories. The ones that are written for the _sake_ of the writing itself. _
Great job.