beautiful. the second poem about disguises reminds me totally of my poem "Dress Up"...just from a different perspective. anyway. all of the poems are beautiful hope there are more soon ~evaa

I like how it's so relatable...nicely done...I like the last four lines.

This is realy good! Short sweet and to the point. I like it!

Short, but -very- nice. =D
I like the almost-rhyming-but-not thing going on. I also think you meant "begin".. instead of "begun".

I realy liked the form - the occasional rhyme pulled me in.