Short, but enchanting. Brevity certainly is the soul of wit. Good job and Keep Writin'! ~*Mettie*~

This is a very good poem. The structure is very good. Each line compliments the other - each factor compliments the other. Very impressive :D

This was good, but because of the lack of a summary, I wasn't sure what it was about. It reminded me of the yellow sands of Egypt. Thanks for your ravishing review of my haiku.

Cool.
Create images without stopping the imagination! Well Done.