wow!! hot damn that was sexy! great job

Wow! That was hott! Yay! Yaoi fangirl salutes thee!

When will our boyos stop? *giggles* love it, explains muchos bout those two. *mutters: wish they'd work it out now tho*

Before I read this, I was scared this was going to turn out cliché. Thankfully, it didn't. And I was glad for that.

There was iniative to all of this, and the progression of it and how it grew throughout the story. It didn't end up being only meaningless fluff for me. Although it WAS fluff...it was something more. A little understanding and a little bit of something else, can't exactly explain; sorry. X_x;

I also enjoyed how through this pseudo-long one-shot, you were able to identify with the characters. You adjusted them well, giving me a clear look on how they could be, their personality, and an insight to the characters themselves. That was really good on your part.

The fact it was simply...hot; in lack of a better term, doesn't make it all that bad either. A bonus, I must say. Reading the summary, I wasn't sure if it was going to delve into the actual sex, but it did. It wasn't tasteless sex either, you inputted emotions into the movements themselves. I really liked that, and just added to the scene.

Another thing, I enjoyed the interaction and communication between the two brothers. They were comfortable with one another, besides the definite curiousity on Alex's part, but that was a definite either way. The teasing playfullness they had between them, really hinted towards something more, a hidden sexual tension of sorts between them. As Rob easily admitted, later on.

On a whole, I wholly enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good writing though, and I can only wait and read to see what else there is you have in store.

Your Friendly Neighbourhood Dead Bisexual

This is the.. hottest thing I've ever read. No kidding.

oh gods O_O this is hot WAY HOT! hell yeah crave it more than drugs XD *drools* teh hotness.

damn! that was good... hehehe... pls fordive me 4 being a little crazy just now . it's just that your story was better than most crap ive read lately thats all... is this a one-shot? if it isn't i hope you can continue...

I refuse to call this hot, because so many other people have. But you really did a good job with this. Although its totally unrealistic...but I suppose thats what makes it interesting. =)Nice job. Keep writing!

-Js

Well...that was interesting. Deliciously so. I liked it, I really liked it. So cute. And Rob...I just luv Rob. Y? I'm not sure but I do. Good story. I'm off 2 read more of ur work.

o...m...g...- that was... interestingly amazing! I luv how you put it in third person omnicient rather than first as most ppl do. It's fairly original and VERY descriptive- but I have to say it's kinda odd how it all started- you'd think the older brother would feel weird about having feeling for the younger one rather than acting on him the moment he's got a chance- but- it moves the plot faster- so I like it! update soon plz^^ byes
...+Allysa+...

this is one of the best incest stories I've read! I love it. It's great if it's a one-shot, but are you continuing? I'm sorta thinking you aren't and that's cool.. *drools* this is hot. :)

whoa! that was soo heated... and yet creepy.. he was ** his brother... eww.

This is good, I guess. They don't seem all together much like brothers at the beginning, but hey.. I like the little slipping in of ideas while the *cough* sex *cough* is happening, that's probably what kept me reading. And I like the end ^_^
So - yes - a little too far in the deep end (heavier than what I normally read) but hey, I got through it. Good writing..

Interesting brother thing.

very well written... and sexy!