 Mettie 2005-02-20 . chapter 1This is so beautiful! I adore butterflies (they're all over my room)! It's such a wonderful poem - a really well-done job. Really well done. Thank you so much for the reviews! I really appreciate them. It's good to see you're a friend of Dancing Tears - I love her work! Well, thanks again and great job! ~*Mettie*~ |
 Grace Cleo 2004-12-07 . chapter 1Wow, Crimson, that was good! I just think you have too much blood in all your stuff! And remember, other things are beautiful too- like a new baby, who once she's just born, is perfectly innocent. The falling of rain, which cleanses the soul. All these things around us are amazing! |
 Beth Marsters 2004-11-22 . chapter 1This poem is so good. You seem to have an obsession with blood, but whatever you describe it so vivdly. |
 SleepDontWeep 2004-08-19 . chapter 1AWH... that was really amazing! i love butterflies too!! i think they r a beautiful creation, i'm just glad they didnt stay a horrible caterpillar!
this is wonderfully written and i enjoyed reading it! well done x
p.s. cud u drop a review by me soon wud love ur opinion on my stuff! |
 Flamyrre 2004-07-25 . chapter 1intereseting. i like it, but that doesnt mean i think the same thing. i dont think beauty can be only found in a butterfly! blood is beautiful. where would we be without it?
how can it be that blood, the elixir of our lives, is the power which sustains us? |
 David Stephen 2004-07-21 . chapter 1At the very, very least: Absolutely impressive...great...well done |