|Reviews for Betrayal|
| Michelle Munoz 7/26/04 . chapter 1
Anni: Wow, that's kind of a depressing one.
Sao: By the way, you wrote "Right in my bad", did you mean "back" by any chance? Thought I'd let you know.
Sao & Anni
| candyratt 7/20/04 . chapter 1
This is incredible, beautiful, and deep. So deep, that I could almost feel the pain you had. Keep writing poetry.