Not like most suicide poems I have read but it definatly has potential. I liked it. You should read my own. Oh and I have read your other poems I am just reviewing them all in one go. They are good, but did you get hurnt in some way? Some of them I didnt understand...I am a idiot -_-'

Very good!

PLS

very good ! it confused me alittle at first but i got it after the first few lines !

I really liked this poem and will be reading more of them. Had alot of feeling, you are very talented, I'm sure you hear that all the time. Thanks for submitting a review on my mystery story, I don't have time to write more now, I'm going to Texas for two weeks. I'm only thirteen and I hope to get better. If I can't make it as anything else in this world I want to be a

forgive me of being sick of cliched suicide poetry.

Beautiful. You really have a way with words.